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The city streets were occupied, with messy, riotous traffic noises. Even though this city is named ‘the city of lanterns’, no light is perceptible.
The moon was beginning to fade away and the dark blanket collapsed on the buildings slowly. The commuters were getting out of the trains, and started walking away.

A boy was in the car, glazing out the window he felt vaque. Staring outside looking at the lamp, the water drops were sliding down, curling down the pole to the floor and it was collected into a small pond underneath. The rain showered down on the floor as if it wanted the floor to suffocate.
It was a plain atmosphere, it was dark and drowsy, and the night was starting to become deprived. It almost felt as if the night was yawning from the sound of the wind. The boy yawned as well. Inside the building was a young woman, her room was undecorated, her bed was messy. Her blonde hair was knotted. Her eyes had blankets under. She was stressed, and her aura was emitting stress. She was typing as if it was her last minute.
She stopped.
And sighed.
She rested her cheek on her hand, and receded back from the table, stared at her screen and sighed again. But then, she looked out the window and her was lightened. It was a dark night and they were soft intricate detailed shapes. They were like soft, silky patels sinking down. It was like small white fairies flauting down in the air e

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Is this character dynamic or static?

Passage from The Princess Bride

Who could suspect that in the morning a different child would wake? I remember, for myself, only trying to beat back fatigue. Even a week later I was not aware of what had begun that night, the doors that were slamming shut while others slid into the clear. Perhaps I should have at least known something, but maybe not; who can sense revelation in the wind?

do you agree or disagree that bigger is a sign that something is important? why or why not ?

Could someone explain to me how to preform a good solid What - How - Why paragraph for my assessment

what is the thesis statement of romeo and juliet act 3 scene 1?

Which sentence shows the correct use of a common homophone?

They’re still not finished with the project that was due yesterday.
Their are a number of great books about the Civil War in the library.
They said they would put away all of there clean clothes before school.
I think I saw an entire flock of wild parrots sitting in the trees over their.

These student apartments _______________ too much to rent an apartment in town.
Anyway, they ______________ much nicer than the ones in town.
costs , seems
cost , seem
are costing , seem
costs , are seeming​

Suggest how literacy can be encouraged/promoted/developed.

Which definition for the word hypothermia can be determined using context clues from this passage?

Prolonged exposure to cold can cause a serious health condition known hypothermia. Other dangers also exist in an wilderness environment including attacks by wild animals, falling tree limbs, and the minor cuts, scrapes and abrasions that can happen to just about anyone!

a dangerous fall that causes injury

a very low body temperature

severe mental confusion or disorientation

short-term memory loss

How change indirect speech of my brother said,"I'm staying here for a week

Essay Outline: Topic is the greatest gift you have ever given OR received.



Task, Purpose and Audience

Task: Create an outline for a 5 paragraph descriptive essay following the prompt.

Prompt: The best gift I gave or received was…

Purpose: The purpose of this essay is to entertain readers by providing an interesting description and theme of generosity portrayed through the topic you pick.

Audience: Your audience will be your teacher.



Hook:

Bridge: (connects the hook and the thesis)

Thesis:


Topic Sentence:

Concrete Detail:

Concrete Detail:

Commentary:

Concluding Sentence:


Topic Sentence:

Concrete Detail:

Concrete Detail:

Commentary:

Concluding Sentence:


Topic Sentence:

Concrete Detail:

Concrete Detail:

Commentary:

Concluding Sentence:


Thesis restatement:

Bridge:

Memorable idea:

Which statement provides the MOST LIKELY reason a reader would argue that "The Journey to Acceptance" is more objective than "Mendel's Momentous Work"?A"The Journey to Acceptance" reads like a scientific book, while "Mendel’s Momentous Work" reads like a blog post.B"The Journey to Acceptance" has a structured argument that is easy to follow, whereas "Mendel’s Momentous Work" is complex and difficult to understand.C"The Journey to Acceptance" praises Mendel as the most important scientist of the 1800s, whereas in "Mendel’s Momentous Work" his scientific discoveries are criticized.D"The Journey to Acceptance" has more facts and details, whereas "Mendel’s Momentous Work" uses feelings and thoughts to make the passage more engaging for readers.

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If you read animal farm, I need a sentence to relate to the novel using the word "excise".

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(I need help on minimizing them so it can be only main points)

21. How can you tell if a speech you've written is clear and concise? please help ​

A letter to your friend telling him/her three ways in which computers have made learning easier for students

In paragraph 4, the author states, “In the digital age, we’re seeing more sophisticated limbs.” What details does he provide in support of this main idea?

What is peak fiction to you guys?

Which statement is an opinion?
You could make a telephone call on it.
A child couldn't afford the expensive price tag.
It has high quality camera and video camera, and it's a videophone.
The touch screen and the keyboard are easy to use and everything is so intuitive. Even a child can use it.

which list shows the plot elements in the correct order

Write a thesis statement explaining how receiving support from others can help you achieve

I. Choose the word A, B, C or D which has different stress pattern
1. A. excellent B. semester C. festival D. celebrate
2. A weather B. trouble C. middle D. delicious
3. A- reputation B-dormitory C- interesting D- character
4. A- recycle B- corner C- encourage D- enjoy

The twins like ice cream (question tag)​

1. Which detail best supports the idea that the Cheboygans stood out from the other students in
school?
(1 Point)
A. "That's when the Cheboygans sailed in, coming through the front doors as if on a tide of light." (Paragraph
11)
B. "The boy was tall, with long auburn hair tied in a pony-tail at the nape of his neck and a smattering
of freckles across his nose." (Paragraph 12)
C. "The city, in our world, could refer to several nearby places – Hartford, New York, Boston - but mostly, we
meant it as a code." (Paragraph 15)
D. "When I walked into Mrs. Bleyer's homeroom, the girl Cheboygan was sitting at my usual desk" (Paragraph
16)

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Which sentence has the most informal style?
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It is not all that important for you to write about a story of personal significance to you.

Where is Grendel? Where does he go? What makes him go? Will he return? What
will he be when he returns? What do his origins and destinations have to do with his
character?

15. James denied to break breaking the window
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Rewrite the following sentence to create question

A) I am in your English class.