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1)

Read the rough draft of a student’s conclusion to an argumentative editorial.

(1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss” and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. (7) It is about time that we replaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.

Which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone?
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, they would admit defeat if only they would do their research and find that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to study their facts and acknowledge that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.



2)Which revision would most improve sentence 7?
suggesting an alternative plan to replace the current school calendar
explaining why the current school calendar is outdated and inefficient
expressing an opinion about those who oppose changing the calendar
restating the strongest piece of evidence used to support the claim


3) Why should sentence 4 be removed from this conclusion?
It criticizes those who disagree with the writer.
It strengthens the viewpoint of the opposition.
It states a fact that is unrelated to the topic.
It unnecessarily restates the editorial’s claim.

4)Which sentence should be removed from the conclusion?
sentence 1
sentence 3
sentence 5
sentence 7

Answer:

It should be removed from the editorial piece because it is repetitive to the rest of it pointing out the fact they we in the United States should get rid of nine-month calender's and continue with year-round schooling. Also in sentence 1) it should either be (help a student's achievement) or (help student's with their achievements.

Explanation:

what is your basic realization about the meaning of your life?​

Dissolve to solidify as noice to slienceword analogy

In lines 276-278 the knight moans
about having the old woman for his
wife. How does she respond to each
objection he raised

Which of the following requires research?
biography
both of these
neither of these
autobiography

how important to have a freedom

Pls help if u know this story

Which phrase guides the reader to use a threatening tone? "If you don't, I’ll do this" "made me cry out" "I opened the parlour door" "I was so utterly terrified"

A pronoun and its antecedent must agree in
A) number, person, and subject.
B) number, gender, and person.
C) gender, number, and subject.
D) person, number, and object.

Sentece or not a sentence? 5. The mail will not be delivered this weekend​

Which of the following might cause someone to seek sanctuary?

A)Danger. B)Hunger. C)friendship. D)War

How dose the syntax contribute to the voice

On March 20, 1966, the solid-gold World Cup trophy was stolen in London, just four months before England was to host the international soccer tournament. Officials began a desperate search but failed to unearth the prize. One night, when a dog named Pickles was taking his evening stroll, he sniffed a package under a car. Unwrapping the package, the dog's owner discovered the missing World Cup! Pickles became an overnight sensation. He appeared on television and signed a contract to appear in a film, "The Spy With the Cold Nose." On July 30, 1966, England beat West Germany 4–2 in the World Cup final. England's team captain, Bobby Moore, stood on a hotel balcony and held up the trophy—and then Pickles—to thousands of cheering fans.
What is the main idea of the passage?

What if we went online and became digital _____________ to help people in need?
data
humanitarians

Pick the correct answer data or humanitarian

What sentence structure is used in the sentence below? Compound or Compound-Complex?
I didn’t read the instructions in Google Classroom, so I wrote the essay on the wrong topic.

What sentence structure is used in the sentence below? Compound or Complex?
The team played their best; nevertheless, the chess team did not make it to the finals.

What sentence structure is used in the sentence below? Simple or Compound?
Feeling proud, I walked across the stage to get my trophy.

importance of decipline in student life​

Which excerpt from chapter 3 of The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrates a character vs. character conflict? O Hosts loved to detain the dry lawyer, when the light-hearted and loose-tongued had already their foot on the threshold; they liked to sit a while in his unobtrusive company. O The large handsome face of Dr. Jekyll grew pale to the very lips, and there came a blackness about his eyes. "I do not care to hear more," said he. "This is a matter I thought we had agreed to drop." O "My good Utterson," said the doctor, "this is very good of you, this is downright good of you, and I cannot find words to thank you in. I believe you fully; I would trust you before any man alive, ay, before myself." O But I do sincerely take a great, a very great interest in that young man; and if I am taken away, Utterson, I wish you to promise me that you will bear with him and get his rights for him."​

please help my with my science work ​

read your letter again compare how you feel now that you know that those feelings were normal and valid say ro yourself my feelings are valid my reaction are normal my freelings and reaction are valid and normal​

Which sentence describes an important characteristic of a personal narrative essay? A. It is based on the writer’s experience of a particular event or period. B. The writer needs to research the topic before writing the essay. C. It tells a fictional story inspired by the author’s real-life experience. D. The writer tries to persuade readers to take action.

The number devil started doing the problem in his head,
but his face turned bright red again and swelled up like a
balloon. Was it because he was angry, Robert wondered,
or because the problem was hard?
"Wait a second," the number devil mumbled. "I can't
seem to come up with anything. You were right. It doesn't
work. How did you know?"
"I didn't. You don't think I'm crazy enough to try a
problem like that do you? I was just guessing."
"Guessing? Guessing is not allowed in Mathematics!
Mathematics is an exact science!"
"But when you said that numbers don't stop, that they go
on till the cows come home, that was a guess, wasn't it?"
"How dare you? What are you, anyway? A beginner! A
rank amateur! And you want to teach me my trade?"



What is one difference between Robert and the
Number Devil that you learn from the passage?


A. Robert likes to guess, but the number devil does
not.

B. The Number Devil asks questions, but Robert does
not.

C. The Number Devil likes doing math, but Robert
does not

PLEASE HELP! Can someone give me a second opinion/help proofread my argumentative essay?

Prompt: Write an argumentative essay for or against setting long-term goals to land a dream job.


A goal is an idea of the future or desired result that a person or a group of people envision, plan, and commit to achieving. Long-term goals are goals that take a long time to achieve or are set to help you succeed later in life. Setting long-term goals in life can set you up for success to land a dream job in the future.


One reason goal setting sets you up for success is because it prepares you for obstacles that you might face in life. Part of achieving goals is facing obstacles that can get in the way of getting what you want and continuing in life. When facing obstacles you often have to learn how to get past and overcome them. Learning strategies and acquiring resources to get past obstacles to become a daily necessity for everybody to be successful in life. Being prepared is of utmost importance to land your dream job.


Setting your life up for success can help you stay focused and motivated to achieve your dream job. Staying focused and motivated can often be tough when achieving your goals. Sometimes you make mistakes or fail, which can make you less motivated. Making mistakes and failing is a part of life, everyone makes mistakes. Mistakes make room for learning, learning how to not make them again and make you stronger and better prepared and can keep a person with long-term goals with a positive view. Staying focused is important because your work reflects how focused and concentrated you are. Giving your full attention and productivity will reflect on the quality of your work by how organized, detail-oriented, and how effective your work is. Maintaining motivation and focus is important to land your dream job.

Long-term goals are very important when it comes to wanting to land your dream job, but are not always seen as necessary for several reasons. It is good to be thinking about your future and long-term goals but throughout everyone's life people change, the world changes, and therefore career paths often change. Young people should be developing diverse strengths and interests when following their career paths to be prepared since goals can change and often have to change jobs and careers throughout their lives. This means that being creative and have to learn to adapt to different life situations, which can be done by pursuing a variety of interests. Diversity gives you access to a greater range of talent and abilities, which could prove necessary later in a person's life. Overall it is important to make long-term goals but a person should be more open to the thought of their goals changing throughout their lives and being prepared for that to happen.

Setting long-term goals in life can set you up for success to land a dream job in the future. It is important to be prepared and do your best to stay focused as well as motivated to be successful when achieving your goals. It is also important to do our best to be open-minded and have a diverse set of abilities to be successful. To land a dream job long-term goals are as necessary as they are proven to set a person up for success.

In paragraph 11, What difficulty does Miller describe when he writes, “like trying to pick one’s teeth with a ball of wool: I lacked the tools to illuminate miasma”?

which type of City - state was Sparta​

It is cold outside today .It change affriamative into negtive sentence.

meaning of the sentence :-
To him that smiteth thee on the one cheek offer also other; and from him that taketh away thy cloak withhold not thy coat also. Give to every man that asketh thee; and of him that taketh away thy goods ask them not again. And as ye would that men should do to you also to them like wise.​

Plz put the correct answer

QUESTION 14
Read this sentence. It contains a comma splice.
I want to go to the yard sale, I heard there are some great deals.
Which of the following makes this sentence correct?
O a. I want to go to the yard sale I heard there are some great deals.
O b.I want to go to the yard sale but I heard there are some great deals.
O c. I want to go to the yard sale; I heard there are some great deals.
O d. I want to go to the yard sale and I heard there are some great deals.

Select the correct answer.
What does it mean not to take information at face value?
A. Thinking about where the information has come from, who is giving the information, and what their motives are
B. Looking further into a subject
C. Reading very carefully between the lines
D. Investigating the history of person who is giving the information

Which of the following authors wrote an autobiographical slave narrative?
1. Frederick Douglass
II. Nathaniel Hawthorne
III. Harriet Beecher Stowe
IV. Harriet Ann Jacobs


Answers
I and IV

Are you afraid to write because you don’t think you’re a good writer? If so, you may have some misconceptions about the writing process. Use this questionnaire to see if you have any misconceptions about writing. Read the pairs of statements below. For each pair, place a check mark beside the statement that you believe to be true.

Writing is easy for good writers. Writing is hard work, even for good writers.
There's only one right way to write. There are many effective ways to write.
The writing process is ordered; it goes step-by-step. The writing process goes to-and-fro and sometimes in circles.
Good writers get it right the first time. Good writers rewrite until they're satisfied with their work.
Good writers know everything they want to say before they start. Good writers often find out what they want to say through the process of writing and revising.
Writing is an inborn talent; it can't be learned. Writing is a skill; it can be learned with study and practice.

what does the quote mean?

“The foundation stones for a balanced success are honesty, character, integrity, faith, love and loyalty.” - Zig Ziglar