Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to an
argumentative editorial
Which best revises sentence 6 to create a more
appropriate and respectful tone?
A be
(1) Year-round schooling would help student
achievement. (2) Not so much information would have
to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the
elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break,
would significantly reduce "learning loss" and the
additional time wasted at the beginning of each
academic year to reteach previously learned material
(4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students
learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the
only country to experiment with a year-round school
schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence
about year-round school and its link to higher
achievement is inconclusive, these people need to
open their eyes and see that students in these schools
consistently score higher on certain assessments than
students who attend schools with traditional nine-
Although many still claim that evidence about year-
round school and its link to higher achievement is
inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-
round students score higher on certain
assessments than those students who attend
schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
O Although many still claim that evidence about year-
round school and its link to higher achievement is
inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students
in year-round schools consistently score higher on
certain assessments than those students who
attend schools with traditional nine-month
calendars
Although many still claim that evidence about year-
round school and its link to higher achievement i

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Answer 1

Answer:

Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Explanation:

All options you were given are the following:

Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, they would admit defeat if only they would do their research and find that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to study their facts and acknowledge that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

The first option is the best one because it is completely objective. Objective statements are statements that contain only facts, statements uninfluenced by personal beliefs, emotions, and assumptions. The student uses data from some research, which makes the statement objective. The tone is also appropriate - it's neutral. Other statements lack objectiveness and their tone is not as neutral as it should be.  

Answer 2

Answer:

A)Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Explanation:

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account of Mark Twain’s experiences as a riverboat captain.


I soon discovered two things. One was that a vessel would not be likely to sail for the mouth of the Amazon under ten or twelve years; and the other was that the nine or ten dollars still left in my pocket would not suffice for so imposing an exploration as I had planned, even if I could afford to wait for a ship. Therefore it followed that I must contrive a new career. The "Paul Jones” was now bound for St. Louis. I planned a siege against my pilot, and at the end of three hard days he surrendered. He agreed to teach me the Mississippi River from New Orleans to St. Louis for five hundred dollars, payable out of the first wages I should receive after graduating. I entered upon the small enterprise of "learning” twelve or thirteen hundred miles of the great Mississippi River with the easy confidence of my time of life. If I had really known what I was about to require of my faculties, I should not have had the courage to begin. I supposed that all a pilot had to do was to keep his boat in the river, and I did not consider that that could be much of a trick, since it was so wide.


Which statement best summarizes the passage?
Twain feels confident about learning the Mississippi River.
Twain finds that piloting a riverboat is not as easy as it looks.
Twain convinces his pilot to teach him how to navigate a riverboat.
Twain is concerned about not having enough money to survive.

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Answer:i think its b

Explanation: just hopeful

Answer:

B

Explanation:

In Act I, Scene 2 of The Diary of Anne Frank, the Franks and Van Daans move into a hidden annex of an office building. After reading this scene, take a few minutes to consider what things you would take if you were forced to go into hiding. Write in your journal about what you would pack and why. Keep in mind that you would only be able to take what you could carry on your body or in a very small sack. Your response should be no less than 150 words in length.​

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Answer:

If I were forced to go into hiding I would wear many layers of cloths like five to six shirts and two to three leggings, a jacket with a lot of pockets and more under clothes. I would do this so I can wear fresh clothes as long as possible and the pockets on the jacket could help me carry more stuff like a phone or charger so I could contact friends and family and go live with them. I would also get my shoes because my slippers would break easily. In my sack I would carry as much as food I can so I would not starve to death. I would bring medicine so if my family got sick or injured they could heal faster and my important documents like ID and passport because when the Holocaust were to end I would flee to another country and I would really need them.

This is 150 words and I hope you have a wonderful day!!!

Please mark Brianiest

Answer:

answering so the other lady can get brainliest

Explanation:

can I have an example of third person perspective? Is it like there their and they're?

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Third person is referring to yourself as if you are a third person. For example: Bill says “Bill does not want food.” Hope this helps :)

Answer:

The third-person pronouns include he, him, his, himself, she, her, hers, herself, it, its, itself, they, them, their, theirs, and themselves.

Example:

Tiffany used her prize money from the science fair to buy herself a new microscope. The concert goers roared their approval when they realized they'd be getting an encore.

[I believe the answer to your question is they’re.]

Explanation:

Recall how the author of "The German Gas Attack at Ypres" describes the scene of French soldiers dying from exposure to poisonous gas. How do his descriptions suggest he feels about the topic?

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Answer:

I think the answer is disturbed, but not emotionally invested.

Explanation:

Answer:

unsettled but not emotionally involved

Explanation:

which is the best summary of the passage

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there’s no passage lol

These were not merely "friendly Indians.”

How does this quotation from "Thanksgiving A Native American View” affect the author’s argument?

The author is arguing that the American Indians were able to help the Pilgrims, because they were sophisticated.
The author is arguing that the American Indians were nice, and that is why they helped the Pilgrims.
The author is arguing that the Pilgrims were not friendly, in contrast to the American Indians.
The author is arguing that neither the Pilgrims nor the American Indians were friendly.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

I put A as a guess and got it right

thank me later

Answer:

The author is arguing that the American Indians were able to help the Pilgrims because they were sophisticated.

Explanation:


Cooking is easy. you put some stuff on the stove. burn it and then order pizza. my mom does it all the time. In what way does this cartoon illustrate the concept of cause && affect?

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Answer:

Said person does something that results in them doing something else

Explanation:

Said person burnt their food which resulted in them ordering pizza, the cause was them burning their food and the effect was them ordering pizza

What did we learn about the character Curley in chapter 2 and why is it important to the story (Of mice and men)? Explain

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Answer:

He is described as “a thin young man with a brown face, with brown eyes and a head of tightly curled hair” which is why he is called Curley.  Curley is described as dressing in a somewhat aristocratic way, as if to separate himself from the lowly ranch hands. The glove is to keep his hand soft for his wife. Curley is the boss's son, and because his father only appears once, Curley is the main representative in the novella of the land-owning class. When this revenge plan fails and he loses face, Curley picks a fight with the vulnerable Lennie to reassert his status.

Read the section "The Creeping Cost Of Costumes And Candy." Select the detail from the section that explains WHY people plan to buy a lot of things for Halloween this year. Group of answer choices He says the economy is doing well. This means that people are more willing to spend money. Shoppers will spend more than $3 billion on costumes. They will spend almost that much on decorations. Just under half of those celebrating will wear costumes. Around half plan to carve pumpkins. About 3 out of 10 people will take their children trick-or-treating. About 2 out of 10 people will go to a haunted house.

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Answer:

He says the economy is doing well. This means that people are more willing to spend money.

Explanation:

According to the section, The Creeping Cost Of Costumes And Candy.", the detail that explains why people plan to buy a lot of stuff for Halloween this year is option A.

This is because the economy is said to be doing well and more people are willing to spend money on Halloween this year, compared to other years.

An insect land on the outside of a car wheel and the car starts to move with the insect on it is the insect accelerating? Why or why not ?

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correct me if i’m wrong but the insect is accelerating based on the car if the car wasn’t there, there wouldn’t be any acceleration happening within the insect.

What does impossibly interwoven even with its hostilities mean in the story A Quilt of a Country from this paragraph. PLEASE HELP 60POINTS



“What is the point of a nation in which one part seems to be always on the verge of fisticuffs with another, blacks and whites, gays and straights, left and right, Pole and Chinese and Puerto Rican and Slovenian? Other countries with such divisions have in fact divided into new nations with new names, but not this one, impossibly interwoven even in its hostilities.”

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Answer: Other countries with such divisions have in fact divided into new nations with new names, but not this one, impossibly interwoven even in its hostilities." Quindlen suggests that, even though hostilities among ethnic groups exist in this country, we are also able to remain--on the whole--unified under one name.

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i was born _______shimla ______a Thursday​

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Answer:

born in shimla on a thursday

Explanation:

aye (this aint academic question) anyone lookin for a guy best friend? XD I'm sorry yall

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Answer:

YES BSF

Explanation:

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beatrice was unable to concentrate on her project because her brother's stereo was turned up to full volume. Which statement is correct?

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Answer:

I'm not sure what the question is.

Explanation:

If you post the statements I can help you answer it, but so far there is only one statement.

13. Which of the following is NOT an example of verbal irony?
(1 Point)
O A left hand person is called a "Lefty"
O A tall person is called a "Shorty"
An arrogant criminal gets caught/
O A best selling writer's latest novel is a flop.

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Answer:

i think the last one but not so sure

In paragraph 23, president Obama quoted Martin Luther king’s I have a dream speech in which he said, I have a dream that my four little children will once day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character. What does this quote mean

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Answer:

the quote means that people should have equal right, no matter the color of there skin or gender

Rodriguez-Padilla celebrates the purity, honesty, and directness of his own childhood writing: "You wrote from the heart back then, about the things you cared about. You didn't care to be the next Kate Chopin or Oscar Wilde" (Eschholz 54). Yet, this piece begins with a quotation from Montaigne and includes several literary references. Is that considered a pardox? Is writing "from the heart" compatible with writing in a sophisticated or intellectually demanding way? Why, or why not?

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Answer and Explanation:

1. This can be considered a paradox. This is because the quote states that the writer did not care about being Kate Chopin or Oscar Wilde, in this case, we can understand that he did not care about the great names of literature, but the author contradicts himself, when he uses quotes from well-known writers, showing that he, in fact, gives importance to the great names of literature. This is a paradox, that is, it is a contradiction that maintains a little bit of truth.

2. Writing "from the heart" is not compatible with writing in a sophisticated and formal way. This is because writing in a sophisticated way means writing in a rational, coherent and grammatically correct way, writing "from the heart" means writing with emotion, regardless of rules, linguistic devices or academic concepts, but in the way that emotion commands.

"when soccer practice was over"

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When the soccer practice came to an end.

Answer:

riding a skateboard

Explanation:

this question needs to be more specific, but i have the answer.

Who is tried from this corona and just wants everything to go back to normal :/

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Answer:

omg please!!!!!!!

Explanation:

Answer:

Me and a lot of others

Explanation:

For once I would like to go somewhere without worrying about getting infected or sick, and I'm sure others do too. Also the masks??? If only we didn't have to worry about those too.

what are the verbs in "after we cleaned the yard,we went inside and ate lunch"​

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Answer:

went

Explanation:

Consider the subtitle of the article: “The inspiring true story of Malala Yousafzai's crusade for girls' education.” Context clues reveal crusade means​

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Answer:

Crusade is campaign for political, social, or religious change.  In the book Malala fights for women's rights and for women's education

Explanation:

Pls help I just need 4 or 5 sentences for a pre writing about a Greek mythical character

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Answer:

Zeus was saved from being eaten by his father Kronos. When he was older Zeus rescued his brothers and sisters, fought his father and the other Titans and banished them. He and his brothers then drew lots to divide rule of the world. Zeus became the god of the sky, Poseidon, the god of the sea, and Hades, the god of the underworld. Zeus was also known as the father of the gods on Mount Olympus and men.

Explanation:

Answer:

In Greek mythology, Medusa (/mɪˈdjuːzə, -sə/; Μέδουσα "guardian, protectress")[1] also called Gorgo, was one of the three monstrous Gorgons, generally described as winged human females with living venomous snakes in place of hair. It is in the Roman poet Ovid’s Metamorphoses that her story is most deeply elaborated. She was lovely, according to the poem—until she and Poseidon had sex in Athena’s temple.[2] Athena then punished her for this violation, by turning her into the monstrous, stony-glanced creature that we know. Thus those who gazed into her eyes would turn to stone. Most sources describe her as the daughter of Phorcys and Ceto,[3] although the author Hyginus makes her the daughter of Gorgon and Ceto.[4]

Medusa was beheaded by the Greek hero Perseus, who thereafter used her head, which retained its ability to turn onlookers to stone, as a weapon[5] until he gave it to the goddess Athena to place on her shield. In classical antiquity the image of the head of Medusa appeared in the evil-averting device known as the Gorgoneion.

According to Hesiod and Aeschylus, she lived and died on an island named Sarpedon, somewhere near Cisthene. The 2nd-century BC novelist Dionysios Skytobrachion puts her somewhere in Libya, where Herodotus had said the Berbers originated her myth, as part of their religion. She remained a priestess to Athena after her death and was risen with fresh hair.

Explanation:

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Help Please! THE BOY IN THE STRIPED PAJAMAS
The passage contains symbolism. What are the boy's hands symbolic of? Explain your answer.

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Answer:

His hands show the difference between poverty and rich.

Explanation:

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What does the post-reading phase involve?
A. Memorization
B. Highlighting
C. Summarizing
D. Planning

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Answer:

Summarizing

Explanation:

Post-reading provide students a way to summarize

Summarizing

Explanation:
You have to summarize what you’ve read in order to gather the important information and events. This will help you with further interpretation of the reading material.

Step to start window ​

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What does this mean???
What is this for? What does step to start window mean?

1. The storm destroyed the sandcastle that we (build) had built. 2. He (not / be) ______ to Cape Town before 1997. 3. When she went out to play, she (do / already) ______ her homework. 4. My brother ate all of the cake that our mum (make) ______. 5. The doctor took off the plaster that he (put on) ______ six weeks before. 6. The waiter brought a drink that I (not / order) ______. 7. I could not remember the poem we (learn) ______ the week before. 8. The children collected the chestnuts that (fall) ______ from the tree. 9. (he / phone) ______ Angie before he went to see her in London? 10. She (not / ride) ______ a horse before that day

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Answer:

1. The storm destroyed the sandcastle that we (build) had built.

2. He (not / be)had not been to Cape Town before 1997.

3. When she went out to play, she (do / already) had already done her homework.

4. My brother ate all of the cake that our mum (make) had made.

5. The doctor took off the plaster that he (put on) had put on six weeks before.

6. The waiter brought a drink that I (not / order) had not ordered.

7. I could not remember the poem we (learn) had learned the week before.

8. The children collected the chestnuts that (fall) had fallen from the tree.

9. (he / phone)Had he phoned Angie before he went to see her in London?

10. She (not / ride) had not ridden a horse before that day

Explanation:

The tense that we have to use to fill the blanks is past perfect simple. We use this tense when we want to talk about an action that took place before another event in the past. Usually, the other situation is in the past simple.

The structure of the past perfect is: the subject (he, she, it, we, you, they, you, I) followed by the auxiliary had and the verb in the past participle.

For example, in the sentence, John knew the town because he had visited it in the past. Knew, is the past simple of know while had visited, is the part of the sentence that is in past perfect simple, and we can see that is referring to an event in the past (knew the city) because of the action that he made previously to that (had visited it in the past).

The correct verb forms to fill the given blanks would be as follows:

1). The storm destroyed the sandcastle that we had built.

2). He had not been to Cape Town before 1997.

3). When she went out to play, she had already done her homework.

4). My brother ate all of the cake that our mum had made.

5). The doctor took off the plaster that he had put on six weeks before.

6). The waiter brought a drink that I had not ordered.

7). I could not remember the poem we had learned the week before.

8). The children collected the chestnuts that had fallen from the tree.

9). Had he phoned Angie before he went to see her in London?

10). She had not ridden a horse before that day.

Past perfect tense is employed to denote the actions that took place in the past prior to an event that happened in the past. The first action is framed using "Subject + had + V3" and the latter action is framed in past indefinite tense i.e. "Subject + V2."Thus, the above blanks would be as mentioned using this tense as follows.

Learn more about "Verb form" here:

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Cesar Diaz begged his neighbor to lend him platform shoes. Which were the hottest new fad at the disco club.


is this a complete sentence or a fragment

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Answer:

I'm pretty sure its a complete sentence

Explanation:

Answer:

Fragment

Explanation:

No complete subject in the second sentence.

The League, like Local 25, had expected a turnout of four or five thousand. They were bowled over by this army, utterly unprepared for it. They had organized strikes in the garment trade, small ones, usually confined to a single shop, but never before had they undertaken something on so vast a scale. They might fail, might be laughed at by the whole of New York as well as John Dyche and the ILGWU men, and all the same they knew this was the challenge they'd been hoping for — their chance to show the world they were more than highbrow butters-in, just as the shirtwaist makers were more than irresponsible little girls.

What conclusion can be drawn by connecting knowledge of the historical time period with information in the text?

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Answer:

3. By providing an organizational structure for working women, the Women’s Trade Union League gained enough strength in numbers to have some power.

Explanation:

Joan Dash's "We Shall Not Be Moved," tells the dramatic story of how the women's union led a massive strike in the history of America. The story of women workers protesting and organizing strikes, women activists working towards ensuring better and equal opportunities to their female counterparts became one of the most important events in labor history.

In the given passage, the narrator recounts how women trade union "organized strikes" that were big, bringing a turnout of "[an] army" totally unexpected by the League. The strike was to show the men or the government as a whole that "they were more than highbrow butters-in, just as the shirtwaist makers were more than irresponsible little girls."

This detail gives the conclusion that the organizational structure of the working women shows how the Women's Trade Union League managed to gain enough strength in numbers to assert their ability and power.

Thus, the correct answer is option 3.

Answer:

C.     By providing an organizational structure for working women, the Women’s Trade Union League gained enough strength in numbers to have some power.

Explanation:

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You see a boat filled with people, yet there isn’t a single person on board. How is that possible?

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Answer:

Everyone on the boat is married.

Explanation:

Answer:

The boat is filled with married people only, no one on board is single.

Explanation:

A speaker says:
You know, you could've finished your project if you hadn't gone to play at your friend's house

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Answer:

Answer choices???

Explanation:

correct, you had all the time in the world to be doing your project and get less stress off your shoulders but instead went to a friends house and completely blew it off.
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